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Friday, March 29, 2019

Ocean Pollution and how we can make a difference


In school I was working on a google slide to show why ocean pollution is a problem and how we could fix it and make a change.
I spent two weeks progressing on this and my outcome was good.
I got help from people on google forms who evaluated my work and then i changed it according to the suggestions.
Overall my outcome turned out good.




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6 comments:

  1. Whaea SharonMarch 31, 2019 at 5:57 PM

    Well done, Kyralee, on getting your done and up on the blog. I like the really helpful list of suggestions you made at the end that we could all do to help make a difference in our environment. Ko Tangaroa koe! You are like Tangaroa, helping protect our marine environment.

    I'd love to know what changes you made after feedback. Next time we will learn how to embed the slide show into the blog so it can play.

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    1. AnonymousApril 2, 2019 at 1:32 PM

      thank you for your helpful feedback, I agree I will have to learn! :)

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  2. AnonymousApril 1, 2019 at 2:30 PM

    good job kfc!
    i like your title

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  3. AnonymousApril 2, 2019 at 1:33 PM

    thanks hehe

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  4. AnonymousApril 2, 2019 at 1:43 PM

    this is great i really enjoyed reading it,but maybe next time have more simple backgrounds as some slides were a little hard to read.overall its really great. :)

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